Unused Evolve Fiction

This is something I wrote to sort of…explain what might be happening on a certain space-station after Kala performed her experiments and went to Shear.

The idea was to point the way toward potential future content. I was pretty happy with it, I thought you folks might get a kick out of it. I think it might have been fun to use the same actors from Evolve and cast them in similar, or deliberately different, roles. Sort of a repertory theater thing.

I’ll be on the stream this Thursday if anyone wants to talk about how the story might have evolved.

Celestial Advanced Projects Mobile Station, Code Named AKHENATEN.

16 hours after Communications went dark.

“I came from the docking level” Harper said. “Whole thing’s collapsed."

“Wait a minute, hang on,” Axel said, panicking a little. “Collapsed, what does that mean exactly?”

Harper looked at Buchholz and Shah. He didn’t like giving people bad news.

“It means there’s no way off the station.”

Buchholz, head down, nodded. He was thinking.

Axel, still covered in grease, looked from one survivor to the other.

“Ok so we activate the distress beacon,” he said with a shrug, like it was obvious.

Everyone in the room looked at each other. No one met his eye. They knew something.

“I mean, right? Why’s everyone standing around? Church, is this not a major goddamn breach of security? Press the big red button, man!”

“Tell him Shah,” Buchholz said.

“Tell me what?” Axel said, his voice breaking. He looked at Shah.

“There is no ‘big red button’ as you put it,” she said.


“There’s no distress beacon,” Buchholz said.

“Didn’t you read your contract, man?” Church, looming over the others, intoned.

“Oh my god,” Axel said.

“This is a top secret station,” Buchholz said. “No one knows we’re out here. Even Celestial execs don’t know the coordinates.”

“How can that be?” Harper, pragmatic until now, demanded. “There’s more’n two million people on this fucking station, how can they not know where they are?”

Shah glanced at Church.

“It’s easy.” The squat, black helmet sitting atop his massive armor meant they couldn’t see his face, but speakers built into the shoulders broadcast his voice. If need be, loud enough to be heard across city blocks. “All comms are scrambled first, then routed through Celestial HQ. They scramble ‘em again before they route them. text. None of it can be traced back here.”

“How long. . .,” Axel started. He suddenly didn’t want to know the answer. “How long until we’re declared missing?”

Everyone looked at Shah. “Two weeks,” she said grimly.

“Jesus,” Axel said. He wasn’t the only one overwhelmed at the news.

“Alright,” Buchholz said. He’d come up with something. The relief on their faces was obvious. “We can’t get off the station. So we move the station.”

“How the fuck are we supposed to do that?”

“It’s the reason we have a Patterson drive,” Shah shrugged. “So the station can be moved in an emergency. Defense against Corporate Raiders.”

“That what you think this is?” Buchholz asked Shah. The two of them had formed an informal command team among the survivors.

Shah pursed her lips, shook her head, but said nothing.

“Every corp in the Arm would kill to get a look at a tenth of what happens here,” Church said.

“What happened here you mean,” Axel said, having recovered. “This is the end of whatever the fuck was going on out here.” He waved his hand around the elevator, but the gesture encompassed the entire station.

“Someone did this,” Church said to Buchholz. “Someone created these things. We find out why, we can stop them.”

“Maybe,” Buchholz said.

The machine-monster whined and groaned as it tried to pull itself up and out of the microgravity well Buchholz projected before it collapsed in on itself. It was hard to tell, of the sounds coming from the beast, which were vocalizations and which were the metals and ceramics inside it screeching under stress.

“It’s working!” Buchholz shouted to Church. The massive creature buckled once, it looked like it was through.

Suddenly the top half of the creature spun and unlocked itself from the lower half. Jets fired, lifting the top half, now looking like a completely separate machine, off the doomed lower half. A huge cannon deployed from the underside of the hovering machine, while another cannon deployed from the exposed midsection of the bottom half.

Both cannons began shooting at Church and Buchholz.

“Oh my giddy aunt,” Harper said, as he came around the corner. He recovered fast enough to switch out to his Deployable Barrier projector. He threw up a tall, semi-transparent reinforced wall in front of Church, then Buchholz.

The walls held against the machines’ cannons, but they quickly went from blue to red as their tolerances threatened to break.

“We got about ten seconds!” Harper said, switching back to his tractor beam.

Then the street shook. The three survivors thought they’d be knocked off their feet.

The rumbling stopped and four auto-cannons popped out of the street, surrounding the monster. Buchholz looked around and saw a slim woman, probably of African heritage, operating a control tablet.

The auto-cannons each identified the monster, and opened fire. As the beams smashed into the hovering half of the machine monster, it lost its ability to right itself, looked like it might crash into the floor.

Then the two cannons retracted and the machine put itself back together again. In an instant, the machine-monster’s skin flashed into a mirror surface, and the fermionic blasts from the autocannons reflected back on the survivors, blasting through Harper’s shields, knocking the three men to the ground.

The monster’s skin-shell went back to normal. It could move, now that the gravity around it was normalized, but it was still under attack from the autocannons.

It stomped off, rounded a corner, and strode off behind a building. As it ran, the pop-up turrets of the autocannons automatically popped back down under the bulkhead while new cannons automatically popped up. They tracked the monster and fired until it was out of range, then retreated under the floor. A whole series of them following the monster, dynamically emerging and firing before hiding again.

The woman with the control tablet ran up to the other three survivors and helped them up.

“The defense cannons only run along the redline,” she said, pointing to the long red stripe that ran down the street. “As soon as it switches streets, it’ll be able to recharge its shields and come back for us.”

“Buchholz,” Buchholz said, as she helped him up. He pointed to the others. “Harper. Church.”

She nodded at Church in his Templar armor. “Security,” she said. Church nodded. “Nice to have someone from Level 3 down here. I’m Ogada,” she said.

“Hey,” Church said. It was impossible to be sure, but it sounded like he was smiling.

“Ok, introductions over,” Buchholz said. “”Everyone for getting out of here?” There were no objections. “Come on,” he said, and they ran for the relative safety of an Elevator.

“Alright,” Shah said, unrolling the blueprint onto the makeshift table they’d brought into the Elevator. The room was as big as a house, which meant it was one of the smallest rooms on the station. Shah had tricked it into stopping between levels for a few moments. It wouldn’t last, but it gave them time. “This is the masterprint for the station’s layout,” she said.

They all crowded in.

“Jesus,” Axel said. “Look how big it is.” For once, no one disagreed with Axel.

Shah nodded. “It’s a mined out asteroid,” she said.

“How do you know that?” Church asked.

“Yeah,” Harper demanded. “How you know all this? You can’t even see the station from the outside. All flights are black-out flights. ”

Shah smiled ruefully. “Not all of them,” she said. “Code clearance blue-black and above are clear-flights.”

“Blue-black,” Harper asked, unbelieving. “You L1? You from Command?”

Shah grinned wider and shook her head. “That’s double-black. I’m red-black, engineering. Hull maintenance. Work outside the station. Well,” she shrugged, “used to.”

“We’re going to need something more detailed,” Buchholz said looking over the blueprint.

Shah agreed. She looked at Ogada. “If we get you to a live terminal, can you get us access to the engineering core?”

Ogada appeared to think about this. “Yeah,” she said. “It needs to be a secure terminal. Not public access. But if we can find a secure feed, yeah. I can hack into engineering.”

Shah nodded. “Then I can get us more detailed plans. But for which level,” she said. “Where are we going?”

“We got two choices, far as I can see,” Buchholz said. “Command or Propulsion.”

“Well shit,” Axel said, pointing at the blueprint. “Those are in opposite directions, up and down.”

“There’s something else,” Ogada said. “Command, ok. We can probably get life support back up from there. And we’ll have all the eyes and ears of the whole station, and all the records. All our answers, right there,” she said, tapping a finger at the top level.

“Propulsion, sure,” she tapped another level. “We need to get the Patterson drive back up. Otherwise it’s still two weeks before anyone comes for us.

“But this is the level we need to secure,” she said, stabbing a finger at Level 30 - Advanced Research: Robotics.

“Right,” Church announced. Buchholz and Shah looked at Ogada, not understanding.

“This whole station is run by robots,” Ogada said. “It basically is a giant robot. This Elevator is a robot, it’s listening to us now. It just hasn’t figured out we’re important yet.”

“I took care of that,” Shah said. “It thinks we’re speaking Mayan.”

“Mayan?” Harper asked.

Shah shrugged. “I had to pick a language it didn’t have a dictionary for.” She looked back at the rest of the group. “But it’s temporary. Elevators are Vok-class. They’re smarter than Mutes and they’re self-repairing. It’ll fix itself soon.”

Ogada was impressed. “A hacker trick. That’s how we have to think now.” She nodded and tapped the blueprint again. “These monsters have control of all the drones on the entire station, they’re all our enemy now,” she said. “So level by level, we can trick them into fighting for us. But that’s all temporary. From Level 30 we can get their directives back. Get them back on our side.”

Buchholz nodded. “So, three teams. One to Command, one to Propulsion, one to Robotics.”

“Yeah.” Axel said, crossing his arms. “Yeah let’s split up. That’s a good idea.”

“You got a better idea?”

“I got lots of ideas,” Axel sneered, “but they all involve making different life choices so I don’t end up on this stupid station in the first place.”

“Ok,” Buchholz said, looking at the team. “Teams of four.” He looked at Shah. “Two weeks right? Plenty of time if we don’t get eaten first.”

“Yeah,” Shah said. “Fourteen days, maybe longer.”

“Five days,” Ogada corrected, her eyes cast down.

“Five?” Buchholz asked.

“Wait, five days,” Axel said. “What happened to two weeks? Five days until what?”

“I mean, I think the entire station will spontaneously disintegrate from so much critical structural damage,” Ogada said, “but assuming it holds up? We got about five days of air. They hit Life Support first.”

“She’s right,” Shah said. “I don’t know why I didn’t think of it.”

Buchholz shot her a look. “You were busy,” he reminded her, biting off any attempt at guilt on the part of the other team leader.

“Air?!” Axel said. “We’re gonna run out of air? We’re on the biggest goddamn space station in the galaxy and we’re gonna run out of air?”

Ogada shrugged. “People gotta breathe,” she said.

The machine grabbed Church, the whole massive plasteel canister that was Church’s Templar armor and slammed him into the ground, the metal deckplates buckled. Church’s helmet snapped off, leaving his head exposed.

The machine snatched Church off the ground, the security commander still firing supermat rounds into the thing, and hurled him into the air.

Church couldn’t right himself, he just spun and flailed as he sailed out over the building opposite the battle, his gun still firing blindly.

Then, just as Church was about to disappear over the top of the building, land who knew where, maybe survive impact, maybe not, he stopped moving, instantly. Just sat there, suspended in the air.

The other two survivors watched as Church lightly, almost gently, righted himself and slowly descended onto the roof off the building. Church’s expression revealed his own astonishment at what had happened.

The mechanical creature grunted and sniffed. Pawed at the ground in confusion.

“What are you waiting for?” a voice called out. A woman’s voice. Buchholz and Axel spun and saw another survivor, a woman in her mid-thirties with jet black hair set off against a stark white and blue uniform neither of them had ever seen before.

She had no gear. No weapons.

She frowned, gritted her teeth, her arms, hands balled into fists, shook. Whatever she was doing took immense effort.

A high pitched whine emanated from behind them. From the monster. They spun around, expecting some new threat, some new, unimaginable weapon sprouting from the machine but turning, they saw the monster was just as surprised as they were.

A spot on the monster’s chest was glowing, white hot. The monster was confused, it didn’t know what was happening any more than they did. It clutched at the spot, tried to rip it out, but the metal and ceramics of its shell were melting, and burned the claw it scraped at the spot with.

It howled in pain.

“Fire!” the woman in white and blue said. Buchholz, Axel, and Church didn’t need to be told twice. They targeted the molten hole in the creature’s shell, and opened fire.

Dying, the machine monster armed its shoulder missile and fired at Buchholz, who it perceived as the leader.

But the glowing glass slug never reached Buchholz. It stopped in midair, just as Church had, turned around, and then sped back at the machine that fired it, striking it squarely in the chest, in the molten hole

The machine monster detonated in an explosion of metal and glass and blue and green liquid.

“You think if we keep gettin’ in trouble,” Church said to Buchholz, “strange people will keep popping out of the woodwork to save our ass?” He’d climbed down from the building he’d been deposited on and was now smiling at Buchholz and Axel.

Buchholz wasn’t in the mood. “Don’t count on it,” he said as the three of them approached the woman.

“Ah,” Axel said. “Hey I know you saved our lives and everything, which is super cool, but who the fuck are you?” he asked, voicing the other survivor’s thoughts.

“Seneca,” she said.

“‘Seneca?’” Axel said. “What kind of name is that? Is that some kind of soda or something?”

“It’s a code name, idiot,” she said, and switched her attention to Buchholz. “Am I talking to him,” she asked, “or am I talking to you?”

“You’re from L22,” Buchholz said.

Seneca nodded.

“What. . .what the fuck is level 22?” Axel asked

Church stood next to Buchholz. “You’re a Special Talent,” he said.

Seneca shrugged. “I’m not that special,” she said, and it seemed like an attempt at humor.

Buchholz nodded, a suspicion affirmed. “Never met a Special Talent,” he said. “Never met anyone from 22. Happy to meet you though.” Seneca smiled.

“What the hell is a Special Talent?” Axel said, looking from Church to Buchholz.

“Can you read our minds?” Buchholz asked. Seneca shook her head.

“Mind-to-mind only works on other Special Talents,” she said. Church and Buchholz looked relieved. Axel still looked, incredulous, from Seneca to the destroyed machine monster.

“You guys have any idea what’s going on?” Seneca asked.

Church shrugged in his massive suit. “Everything’s fucked,” he said.

“Are you the only survivor from 22?” Buchholz asked.

“How’d you do that shit?” Axel asked. No one seemed to be listening to him.

“Sixty thousand people lived and worked on L22,” Seneca said. “I hope I’m not the only survivor.”

“Only one to make it out though,” Church observed.

Seneca looked at the ground. “Yeah,” she said. “It’s a mess up there,” she said. “Everyone cut off from everyone else. I’m probably the only survivor from my building.”

Buchholz surveyed the ruined street the stood on. “Let’s get off the street,” he said. “There are others,” he said to Seneca. “We’re gonna try and get off the station.”

Seneca nodded. “Sounds good to me,” she said. “Lead the way.”

Buchholz headed west, Seneca and Church followed. Axel stood there, looking from the smoking monster to the other survivors as they walked away.

“Why doesn’t anyone ever tell me anything?” Axel complained. Then he ran to catch up.

“What am I looking at?” Buchholz asked. He was standing on stop of the husk—corpse?—of a machine monster. It was only thirty feet high, but he felt like he was standing on a mountain.

“I don’t know,” Seneca said. She was crouched down, resting on the balls of her feet to get a closer look at the thing’s insides. “I mean these are. . .this doesn’t make any sense.” She shone her flashlight into the guts of the thing they’d ripped apart.

“That,” she said, “is the fast-logic core of a SuperVok drone.”

“This is a drone?!” Axel asked, letting his grav-cannon rest for a minute, muzzle down, on the monster’s shell.

“Nono,” Seneca corrected. “It’s in there, but it’s not hooked up to anything. Just power out. Like a battery maybe. Meanwhile this. . .,” she moved her flashlight.

“Ugh,” Axel said.

“Is obviously some kind of organ. But from what animal? I am the wrong person to ask.”

“Level Eighteen,” Buchholz said without inflection.

“I dunno, those guys are crazy, but they’re strictly organic. This is. . .I don’t know what this is. The shell is metal, ceramics, glass. But it looks extruded. Or excreted. And the insides? I mean, that’s blood, there’s blood everywhere. What’s it use blood for? And those are data cables! Where are they going? L18…could they be collaborating with L30?”

“What’s level eighteen?!” Axel asked

“Biotics,” Buchholz said, deliberately using the formal term so as to keep Axel’s high-strung nervous system from snapping.

“The Body Banks, man,” Church said standing on the street. He was guarding the corpse from any insane drones that might try and dismantle them. “They oughtta shut that whole level down, flush it all out into space.”

“Church,” Buchholz said

“Last thing we need is goddamned nightmare monsters crawling around inside the deck plating because those assholes can’t keep their shit locked down.”


“I’ve heard of doctors playing God, but that whole level is like an army of people playing H.P. Lovecraft, and they got real good at it.”


Church turned around and leaned back to look up, his helmet affording little articulation.

“Oh.” He saw the state Axel was in. “Sorry.”

“No,” Axel said, shaking and failing to hide it. “It’s cool guys, I’m ok.”

Buchholz clapped him on the shoulder. “You’re doing great,” he said. “Remember, we beat this thing. We can do it again, if need be.”

“Yeah,” Axel said. Hefting his weapon. “Yeah we beat it. Yeah.”

“Whatever was on Ell One Eight,” Buchholz said, “it’s all dead by now anyway.”

“Yeah,” Church agreed, trying to show willing. “All the things they breed, they need food, right? No one around to feed ‘em, they die.”

“Yeah,” Axel said, feeling reassured.

“Yeah,” Church agreed. “’Course those monsters tipped this whole station over, probably fed 30,000 people to whatever lived on L18.”

“Ok,” Axel said, trying to ignore him.

“But most of their shit can’t reproduce anyway,” Church continued. “I mean some of it can, probably, but….”

“Oh my god, can you NOT?!” Axel cried.

“Alright we’re leaving!” Buchholz said, hopping down from the top of the beast.

“Ogada!” Shah shouted. Harper tried to keep the machine off Ogada, but his battery was so low the machine could ignore him.

Ogada was on her side, still disoriented. The massive machine-monster was close enough to forego the use of its It was simply going to crush Ogada.

Then of all things in that moment, the strangest sound. Like the beat of a drum. Getting louder. Getting closer.

Then the monster exploded. Bits of metal and blood and wiring and fire rained down around Shah.

When the smoke cleared, there was something standing in the place of the monster. Something that had run at the beast and slammed into it, destroying it. Finishing the job Ogada and Shah started. It was almost as big as the machine-beast. It was familiar….

“An M-Drone!” Shah shouted. Ogada stood up, happy to be alive, but backed away. Unsure of the drone.

“Stay back!” Harper barked. “The drones are…,” he stopped as he saw the robot just standing there. Lights still green. Not red like the rest of the Subverted drones.

“I think…, I think it’s….” Shah had her weapon out.

Ogada relaxed first. “It’s safe,” she said. “It’s still under Control.”

Shah sheathed her rifle and slowly approached the massive war-drone. It had “M121” printed on its plate. It was almost twice as tall as Church. But its posture was passive…for the moment.

“Thing saved our bacon,” Harper said. “Nice to see something on our side for once.”

“Let’s see,” Shah said. “Sit!” she ordered.

The huge drone threw its legs forward and unceremoniously dumped itself on its butt.

Shah looked at Ogada and Harper and nodded, impressed. “My new favorite drone,” she said.

“I can think of worse things than having a War Drone on our side,” Ogada agreed.

They both peered up at the huge red drone. “But why is it still under Control? I thought Control was smashed.”

“Maybe the war drones are on a different Control circuit? Would make sense.”

“Really?” Harper wondered, skeptical. “Different than security, surveillance, crowd control?”

“I don’t know,” Ogada gave up, exasperated. “These things could come from a completely different department for all I know, this station has lots of secrets.” This was something Shah could not argue with.

“Can you follow us?” Shah asked.

The War Drone stood up, making a lot of noise and shaking the ground as it did so.

“Ok,” Shah said. “Follow us.”

The women left. M121 followed.

“I don’t think we can just blitz straight to Command,” Shah said. “We need to spend some time figuring these things out. I mean they came from some level, we gotta figure out which one. What. . .whose project was this? What happened?”

Buchholz folded his arms. “We don’t know enough,” he agreed. “We don’t know if we need to head up to Command or down to Propulsion. And we have no idea where these things come from. I mean, let’s say we access a secure line, what do we look up? Do these things have a name?”

Shah saw Seneca was hugging herself, shaking.

“Are you alright?” She put a hand on Seneca’s shoulder. The younger woman jerked away, scowled at Shah.

“Buchholz,” Shah said, trying not to attract attention.

The team’s co-leader looked from Shah to Seneca, saw that something was wrong. Let Shah handle it.

“Seneca, do you need a medic?” Buchholz asked.

“Look,” Ogada said, nodding at the War Drone M121. Its blue lights were pulsing slowly in a rhythmic cascade. It hadn’t done that before.

“I don’t need a medic goddammit,” Seneca hissed. Something was clearly wrong, she looked like she had the flu. Sweating, shaking.

“Well,” Buchholz said, “good. Because we don’t have a medic. So whatever’s wrong, we need to know because we need you.”

“Then you need to keep that thing the fuck away from me,” she said, pointing at drone M121. Her hand shook.

Now everyone was watching. Axel saw it first.

“I think it’s doing something to her,” he looked from the robot to Seneca and back. The robot stood passive, but its lights were now vibrating intensely.

“How can it. . .,” Harper stared, then stopped. Seneca was sweating, breathing rapidly.

“Seneca,” Buchholz said. She wasn’t listening. He stepped between the War Drone and the Special Talent. “Seneca!” he barked. Finally, she looked at him.

“What is happening?!” Buchholz shouted to try and get Seneca’s attention, but while her eyes were looking at him, it was clear she could not see.

She pressed her fists to her temple. Shut her eyes tight, and shouted “It’s killing me!!”

The pulsing lights on M121 faded to a constant, dull blue. The drone made no movement, appeared perfectly still. Did it think Seneca was a threat? Is she a threat? Buchholz wondered.

“What was it doing to you?” Shah asked.

“Why don’t you ask him,” Seneca was hunched over, seemed to want to avoid the other survivors as much as the drone.

Everyone looked at the hulking drone, then back at Seneca, like she was crazy.

“Seneca” Harper said, talking softly. “We can’t ask it anything. That’s M121. ‘M’ for Mute, you know that.”

Seneca shook her head finally, cleared it. She straightened up, and with murder in her eyes, turned to confront M121.

She slowly, but steadily approached the War Drone, the hulking robot was three times her height, but it shrank back, flinched from her.

“Are you going to tell them,” she asked, her eyes burning, “or will I?”

M121 stood, mute.

“She’s lost it,” Axel said. “She’s snapped.”

Seneca turned her back on M121 and faced the other survivors. “There are three kinds of drone on this station,” she said, giving a lecture. “M-series for Mute, V for Vok, SV for Super-vok. . .,”

She turned back to face M121.

“And then there’s you,” she said, staring up at M121.

No one spoke for a few moments.

“Maybe this ‘talent’ thing,” Axel broke the silence, “maybe you go bonkers, you know?”

“Hang on,” Buchholz said. He and several others had noticed M121’s strange response to Seneca’s challenge, and were now watching M121.

M121’s single massive ocular scanner swept across the other survivors. The room held its breath.

“THE CREATURES HAVE NO NAME,” it said in a deep, sonorous voice.

“Holy shit!” Axel shouted. Many of the other survivors took a step back when M121 talked. This was no simple “Yes/No/Thank You” Vok drone, not even a fast-logic Super-Vok. There was a person in there, they could tell. A Mind.

The rest were dumbstruck, some terrified. But Seneca had already faced this demon, and her mind proved the stronger. She would not be cowed.

“You know what these things are.”


“Where?” Seneca demanded. Buchholz and Shah were happy to let the Special Talent do the interrogation of the nightmare machine.

“LANDFALL, SLATE, CHAPEL,” he said naming obscure worlds. “FACTOR. SHEAR.”

“Shear,” Ogada said. “We just got a top-secret Nordita report from Shear. Their colony collapsed. We were trying to decode the report when…everything happened.”


“I bet you do,” Axel sneered.

“Was that a list of failed colonies, M121?” Buchholz asked.


“You’re not Subverted,” Ogada said.


“But you’re not on our side,” Church challenged.

“I AM.”

“I watched you attack Seneca,” Church said. Of all of them, he might be the only one who could stop M121 if he went mad. “How did you do that? It looked like you were trying to cook her, you got a microwave transmitter in there? What did you do to her?”

M121 said nothing. Seneca answered.

“He read my mind,” she said.

“What?” Ogada asked. “What, like, an active PCAT scan?

“She said it,” Shah realized, looking from Seneca to M121. Then she walked up to Seneca. “You told us when we met you. You said ‘mind to mind only works…,’” she turned to look at M121 towering over all of them, “…on another Special Talent.”

“Oh my god,” Axel said. The survivors all collectively felt their skin flash over in goose bumps. All the warmth in the room fled.

“That’s impossible,” Harper said, eyes darting to M121 and away. Afraid to look directly at him. “How can you have a Special Talent Drone?”

“Man I didn’t even know what a Special Talent was before two days ago!” Axel said. “You can’t say what is and what is not in a place like this!”

“I mean, what is this station,” Seneca said, tacitly agreeing with the survivor from maintenance, “if not a place to cook up insane things like this,” she gestured rudely at the Telepathic War Drone.


“Your curiosity almost killed Seneca,” Shah pressed.

M121 turned its massive, blue, ocular sensor to Shah. “I KNOW,” it said flatly. “BUT I DIDN’T MEAN TO. THAT’S WHY I APOLOGIZED.” Its speech was more sophisticated than most Minds. More natural. But its thinking seemed more alien.

“Apology rejected,” Seneca said. “If you’ve never encountered a Talent before, then what the hell were you…made. . .for. . .” Seneca knew the answer to her question before she’d finished asking it.

M121 detected her realization. Answered her unfinished question. “MERELY A HYPOTHESIS,” it said. “WE ARE DESPERATE. THESE ARE DESPERATE TIMES FOR HUMANITY. I AM A DESPERATE MEASURE.”

“The monsters,” Seneca said, her voice low. “Are they Talents? Have you made mind-to-mind contact with one?” She feared the answer even as she needed to know.

M121 was silent. As mute as its name intended.

Seneca clenched a fist, as though she could will M121 to answer. Maybe should could, Buchholz thought. But he’d watched the mental fight between them and the toll it had taken on her and didn’t want to risk it.

“Church!” Buchholz called out.

Church armed his Supermaterial Cannon.


“Feel free to use big words,” Ogada said. “We’re smart people.”


“Only now?” Seneca asked.


“You said it was different,” Buchholz said. “How different?”


“What?” Buchholz needed answers, and was eager for something, anything, more than the nothing they already knew.

“A FACE,” M121 intoned.

“A…a face?” Suddenly Buchholz didn’t want to know that badly.


The survivors held their breath.


No one spoke for a moment.

“I’m serious, are there not escape pods?” Axel again broke the silence. “Has to be another way off this ride. I do NOT want to spend the next three days running around with THAT creepy thing.”

“Who’s ‘we,’” Seneca asked. She wasn’t done with her interrogation.

M121 said nothing.

“You said ‘we are desperate.’ Who’s ‘we?’”

Nothing from the drone.

“Who created you?” Shah asked.

“MY MIND WAS INITIALIZED ON EARTH,” M121 said. Ogada recognized this as an evasion. She stepped forward, stood next to Seneca.

“Who designed you? Who owns your chassis?” Ogada asked explicitly.

The telepathic Mind masquerading as a Mute looked from Seneca to Buchholz to Ogada.


Buchholz mouth dropped open.

“CIG9!” Church exclaimed.

“A fucking robot spy,” Axel said. “A robot spy from Hub!”

“It’s a war,” Church said. “A war between CIG9 and these monsters and we’re caught in the middle.

Shah looked from Seneca to M121.

“What the hell’s going on, on this station?”


Part Two

“Goddamn, look at these things,” Axel said as they walked past the decaying husks of the techo-organic monsters. They were huge, dwarfing the four survivors. “Is this what we got to look forward to? What are these, stage five? Six?” His voice was hushed. There was no movement on any sensors, but the presence of a dozen massive dead monsters in the cavernous level made them cautious.

“Maybe,” Seneca said. “We’ve fought an awful lot of these things though. Anyone ever see a stage four? Ever hear a report describing a fourth stage?”

“No,” Shah said. “Security records all agree, stage three’s been the limit so far.”

“So what the hell are these?” Harper asked.

“Well, they’re obviously our monsters. I mean that,” Seneca nodded at a dead monster, “is a Howler. That’s a Stormbringer. We’ve fought these.”

“But they’re fucking huge!” Axel said.

“So something happened to them,” Shah concluded. “Something took our monsters and made them bigger.”

“Well that’s fucking wonderful,” Axel shivered.

“There’s good news though,” Shah said.

“Yeah? What?” Axel wasn’t convinced.

Shah smirked. “Something killed these things.”

“Hey, good point!” Axel said. “Yeah they’re fucking dead. Man that IS good news.”

“They got big, and then they died,” Harper said. Looking at the husks—they’d never decided whether ‘corpse’ was accurate—Harper noticed something. “They exploded from the inside,” he said.

“Yeah,” Seneca said.

“There’s light arms fire,” Shah said. “Carbon scoring across them, nothing serious. Whoever killed these things, they weren’t as heavily armed as we are. How’d they do it?”

“Maybe they didn’t,” Harper said. “Maybe these things died from. . .natural causes? Does that happen? Sounds stupid."

“Who knows what the life cycle of these things is. If you can even call it a life cycle. But whatever this was,” even the normally stoic Shah’s voice was hushed and ominous in the shadow of the dead beasts, “it was violent.”

Seneca shone her flashlight into the exploded husk of a Harrower. The light reflected off the black ceramics and dark red organs. “What could do this?” she wondered aloud.

“I don’t know,” Shah said, “But I bet the answer is in there.”

The four survivors stopped in front of their goal. The towering ruin of a spaceship on its side.

“It’s a ship,” Shah said. “What’s it doing here?”

“It’s an Osiris–class corvette,” Harper said. “Looks like,” he craned his neck up to see into the maze of pipes and conduits in the ceiling. He pointed his flashlight up, but its feeble light was no match for the looming darkness above. “It was being repaired. I think it came unmoored from its dock."

The ship lay on its side, the wrecked hull dominating the level. The team stood before a hole in the hull big enough to drive a heavy lifter through.

“Is this hole what they were trying to repair?” Shah asked looking at the hole.

Axel and Harper, the mechanic and the engineer, approached the edge of the tear in the hull.

“No,” Harper said. “Look. Claw marks. This metal was bent until it failed. The monsters did this.”

“They ripped it open,” Axel said, in awe. His imagination already getting away from him. “The monsters ripped it open trying to get inside.”

“Why?” Seneca asked, shining her light into the hull of the ship. “What’s in here?”

“Two things,” Shah said. “Only two things the monsters seem to care about.”

Harper turned from examining the hull to shine his light on the older woman. “People,” he said, “And Patterson tech.”

“Ship’s big enough to hold a thousand people,” Axel said.

“What about its engine,” Shah asked. “Is there a Patterson drive in there?”

“Bet on it,” Harper said. “Ship like this will have a huge drive. All of Celestial’s heavy warfighters have FTL.”

“So I guess we’re going in,” Axel said.

“I guess we are,” Shah said, and the four of them began to climb up and into the corvette.

“It’s dead,” Church declared, the only one of them not behind cover. Church was cover.

Buchholz, Ogada, and M-121 came out from behind the wall.

“What the hell was that thing?” Buchholz asked.

“Looked like a Harrower,” Ogada said, as the four of them approached.

“But it was fucking BIG, man,” Church said, his voice amplified by his powered suit. “Never seen a monster that big, even a stage three.”

“It was different than the others,” M-121 said as it approached the dead monster. The rest followed.

“Maybe it’s a stage four,” Ogada suggested. That would explain it.

“Why can’t it ever be good news?” Buchholz said.

“How did something this big get the drop on us?” Ogada asked.

“It was invisible,” Church said.

“What?!” Ogada squeaked.

“Are you sure?” Buchholz asked.

“I saw it decloak, or whatever. It’d been stalking us for a while.”

“So now we add a cloak to the list,” Buchholz said, weary.

“PERHAPS NOT,” M-121 said, standing before the dead Harrower.

Buchholz stood next to the drone-that-was-not-a-drone and waited for the machine to finish its thought.


“Like a mutant,” Ogada said.

“We got billions of keys of top-secret research on this station,” Church said. “Maybe this one found something that changed it?”

“FOUND SOMETHING,” M-121 said, “OR WAS EXPOSED TO SOMETHING.” It presented its hand to the monster, palm out. A panel flipped open revealing a sensor in M-121’s hand. He bathed the monster’s husk in blue light.

“YES,” M-121 said, scanning. “I’VE GOT IT.”

“What?” Buchholz said.


Ogada took a step back.

“M-121,” Buchholz said, “are we in danger?”

“No,” Church offered. “Minkowski rays are what the Patterson effect gives off. They’re harmless to us, don’t interfere with our tech.”

“But they did something to this monster,” Buchholz said. They all crowded in closer. “Made it stronger.”

After a moment’s silence, Buchholz turned to Ogada. “Where’s the nearest source of this radiation?”

“Jesus what happened here?” Shah asked.

The four of them stood in what might have been the engineering bay. It was hard to tell. Neither Harper nor Axel had ever been inside one of these things and even if they had, the ship was sitting on its side making navigating through it a disorienting chore.

Seneca shone a light around. There were dead people here, some torn apart. And what were probably the remains of several dead monsters.

“Last stand,” she said.

“But it worked,” Shah insisted. As much to reassure herself as anything. “There’s a dozen dead people here, but we passed twice that many monsters on the way in. And they were huge. Whatever these people were doing, it worked.”

“The monsters tried to stop them,” Seneca said. “They knew these people were trying to destroy them, and they tore through all those deck plates to get in here and stop it.”

“That’s alarmingly plausible,” Shah said. “I preferred thinking of these things as clever animals. Now they’re intelligent, thinking beings?”

“Maybe not,” Harper said. “Look at the engine."

“Which. . .the what?” Seneca asked. Harper pointed. A large metal sphere sat in the middle of the ship’s ceiling which, because of the angle at which the ship lay on the ground, was now the wall.

The sphere was cracked. Like a giant eggshell, part of it lay on the ground, the rest was still in its housing.

“The containment shell failed,” Axel said. “Cracked under strain.”

“Strain of what?” Shah asked.

“If it failed,” Harper said, “we’re screwed because those shells are an iron/duocarbon lattice. Which means there’s nothing we’ve got that the monsters can’t destroy.”

“No,” Axel said running his hand along the edge of the broken shell. "This isn’t like the hull. The monsters didn’t do this. It’s not bent or ripped, it’s fractured.” He tapped the shell of the drive with the butt of his flashlight. It cracked and flaked. “Useless,” he said.

“The drive has something to do with this,” Harper said.

Shah turned and looked back the way they came. Their path from the hole in the hull to the cracked FTL drive was a straight line of ripped apart deck plating. “They tore through the ship trying to get to it.”

“I’m having a hard time putting this together,” Shah said. “A horde of monsters rip open the hull of this ship. Why?”

“They go after the Patterson tech,” Harper said. “We’ve seen it. Relays, generators. Same thing happened on Shear.”

"But then something happened, and they all died,” Seneca said.

"Big monsters, bigger than normal. And a huge Patterson drive. And a last stand,” Shah looked at the corpses of the people who died here. The place smelled of blood and burning flesh and plastic. “What’s the connection?”

“Wait,” Harper said, “I’ve got it. Look.”

The other three walked over to see what Harper was holding.

“Axel, are these what I think they are?” Harper presented a pair of c-shaped metal hooks painted red he’d picked up off the ground, each only a little bigger than Harper’s hand.

Axel took one, looked around, and slotted the red handle into a panel on the ship’s control board. One end of the red handle fit neatly into the board. The other hung free, it wouldn’t slot back in.

“It’s a failsafe bypass,” Axel said. “You break the panel pulling them out.”

Harper nodded. “Yeah. I’m beginning to get a picture.”

“Well I’m not,” Seneca said, “explain it to me.”

“This panel is the regulator,” Harper pointed to the control panel Axel had slotted the failsafe clamp into. “You pull these out,” Harper extracted the spent handle from the board, “and you can send the drive into a feedback loop.”

“And what happens?” Shah asked.

“The drive overloads,” Harper shrugged. “If the drive’s big enough, anything could happen. Sometimes they evaporate, ships disappear. Lotta people think that’s what happened to the Agamemnon. Spontaneously converted into a white hole after its twin drives created a self-sustaining feedback loop while the safeties were engaged.”

“That’s why no more twin drives,” Shah said.

“They overloaded the engine,” Seneca said. “And killed every monster on this level.”

“Is it as simple as that?” Axel asked, daring to hope.

“One way to find out," Shah said.

“Ogada,” Shah said, first thing upon entering the room they were using as a command center. “Did you decrypt that report on Shear?”

“Yeah,” Ogada got up and sifted through a pile of messengers before finding the right one. She brought up the file. “What are we looking for?”

“Colony manifest. I need any reference to Patterson drives.”

“Easy,” Ogada said, tapping on the messenger. “Done.”

“How many were there on Shear?”

Ogada scrolled down a list and shrugged. “Dozens,” she said. Buchholz walked over and stood behind her, looked at the messenger over her shoulder.

“Wait, they had dozens of dive-capable ships on Shear?” Buchholz asked. “Then why didn’t they. . .”

“Hang on,” Harper said, and took the messenger from Ogada. He scanned the list. “Power relays, generators. Yeah these are all commercial-class generators,” he looked at the rest of the group. “Not FTL drives. Not big enough.”

None of them?” Shah frowned. Their theoretical possibility was starting to look like a practical impossibility.

“What did you find?” Buchholz asked.

“Wait,” Harper said, caught up in the moment. “Yeah, look,” he handed the messenger to Shah. “Bottom of the list.”

“Nordita EET-105,” she said.

“Old ship,” Church chimed in.

“That was their transport,” Ogada said. “It’s how they got the remaining colonists to safety.”

“Wow,” Shah said, and pointed at something on the messenger, showing it to Harper, “what’s that number?” Down the right of the list, each drive had a number associated with it followed by a ‘k.’

“Kaluzas,” Harper said. “It’s the unit of dimensional displacement. Bigger is better.”


“Kaluzas,” Shah said, raising her eyebrows in disbelief. “And bigger is better. Nothing on the list over 10. Then the EET-105 at 512?" She looked at Harper. Was that right?

“Big drive,” Harper said. “Medium-sized industrial unit.”

"How big is the drive on an Osiris¬-class corvette?” Seneca asked, pointedly.

Harper and Axel looked at each other and shrugged. “A hundred?” Axel said.


“Those folks on L53 blew up a dozen monsters, more, and they were BIG, with one 135k drive,” Harper said.

“And the colonists on Shear had a drive four times as big,” Shah said.

“They could have stopped it,” Buchholz said. “They could have overloaded the drive on that transport ship and killed every monster on that colony.”

“Maybe,” Harper conceded the point. "But they’d be stranded.”

Shah shrugged. “Only until a rescue ship arrived,” she said. “Which…colony that big? Weeks at the most. Maybe days. And they had a whole planet, 50 years of colonization to survive off of in the meantime.”

Buchholz wasn’t on level 53, but he caught on. “How big is this station’s Patterson drive?”

Everyone looked at M-121.


“Goddamn,” Axel said. “That’s gotta be enough. It has to. We gotta try!”

“You think the station’s drive can kill these things?” Buchholz asked.

“We think some survivors on L53 wiped out the monsters on their level by overloading a warship’s drive," Shah said.

“That’s interesting,” Buchholz said, looking to Ogada and Church and M-121.

“What?” Harper asked.

We found out something too,” Buchholz said. Everyone was watching him now.

“These monsters feed off Minkowski radiation,” he said. “You’re saying this radiation can kill them. It could also give them enough power to kill us all.”

“Yeah,” Axel said, nodding. “It’s like a drug. A little is nice. A lot is better. Too much is deadly.”

“Now I get it,” Shah said. Like a tennis match, everyone turned from Buchholz to her.

“Those people on L53 sent that ship’s drive into overload. While it charged up, it attracted every monster on the level. Powered them up. They flocked to the drive like moths to a flame. Then the drive overloaded and. . .the moths burned to death.”

“So what happened to the survivors on El-Five-Three?” Ogada asked. “If the drive overloading didn’t kill them, what did?”

“It looked like whatever happened there was a few days ago. Comms were still down then. They wiped out all the monsters on their level, but they couldn’t tell anyone what they learned. And more monsters came.”

“If we can make it work, then they didn’t die in vain,” Buchholz said.

“Ah,” Axel said, and attracted the group’s attention. “So. . .Shear, right? Big planet, big colony. Lots of flights in and out. Commercial flights, right?” Heads dropped as people figured out what he was saying.

“You blow that drive, then we’re stuck here. And no one knows where ‘here’ is.”

“But we’ll be alive, and free of the monsters,” Buchholz said.

“How long will it take to overload the station’s drive?” Shah asked. Everyone looked at M-121.

“BETWEEN 580 AND 640 SECONDS,” M-121 said. Then translated for his human teammates. “TEN MINUTES.”

“So for ten minutes we’re going to feed these monsters as much radiation as they can stand. They’re going to turn into supermonsters. What happens if they get to us before the drive overloads?”

“Then we all have a very bad day,” Buchholz said. “Anyone else?”

There were no other questions.

“I’m in favor of blowing the drive and killing these things,” he continued. “If it means we’re stranding ourselves on this station, so be it. Beats getting eaten.”

“SECONDED,” M-121 said, the only one among them who didn’t need to worry about food or water.


Thanks for this Matthew, you’re the best!



Amazing, thanks.

Damn this is gonna take awhile. I’ll probably have no idea what happens but that’s ok.

Well I’ll be on the stream Thursday! You can ask!


Great! I’ll have alot of questions. Also, when’s the time? Really hope I’m not in school during it.

Can you answer one question now? Which era is Glacial Bob from?

I really don’t know anything about the Eras. Or rather, I don’t know enough about them to comment. They were Brandon’s baby.


I hate seeing a good story cut short :frowning:


Well that’s kind of gone now. Is there another place I can ask?

They must be planning an official topic at some point. Just hold your questions for now.

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@Matthew you have way to much time

I wish I had as much time as you to make backstories and stuff

but then again it is kind of your job :stuck_out_tongue:

Thank you @Matthew. I’ve always loved reading your stories. Thank you for taking the time to give us one last read.


I don’t have words. You know how much and what i said about you as a writer. I loved your universe.
And i’m damn sad when a good story ends prematurely


Thanks. I’ve been lurking, reading your Evolve lore for a while now. I think you’re great at this and I hope you get to keep doing it for a long time, Evolve or not.


Now that I saw the other sad sad post I feel bad

@Matthew You are one of the best story writers in this world

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Thanks for all the stories and fleshing out this wonderful characters and universe. You went above and beyond! I wish you could release a full book with Evolve related fiction.