So I’ve noticed recently that this community is really nice and supportive and if anybody here disagrees or dislikes something they usually word it in a way to be more productive. So my question to all of you, if I wrote a book, would you read it?
I am 18 and am going to major in Video game design and I am trying my hand in art, music, programming (my focus), and story writing. I remember around Kala’s release @Matthew showed her backstory in a way and it was so well written. I just hope I could even get close to that.
My book is in the works right now with about 30 pages, it is the backstory to a character that my first game is centered around. Below is an excerpt from the prologue written in first person by Subject 7. She mentions she is a science experiment, she isn’t entirely human and that plays a big role in both the game and book. I just want to know if it seems interesting concept, or a good hook. And it has a really dark story line to it.
“This will be the first and last book I write. I’ve always wanted to write fiction, I wish the events I’m about to tell you were fiction. In a way, this is an autobiography of a science experiment, told mainly from my perspective at the time of the events. Although I’m looking at it as more of an explanation for the decisions I have made and am going to be making in the near future. This is why I’m choosing to die.”
if you want to see more, https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Wo86rmhkWMRIMnBF424R383mIN3FW5JdRV698PfWpmo/edit?usp=sharing
and only about 15 pages have been reviewed and revised. feel free to leave any comments or suggestions on the page.