Nobody really picks LS and VT at S1. LS is very easy to dodge. Banshees would be better. You can lay them behind you as you flee giving hunters something to focus on. You can also use them with VT and snowballs to quickly kill 4 meats with the new damage at 1 point.
S1: 1 BM, 2VT [Alternative setup: 1LS, 1VT, 1BM]
If you’re going to sneak, don’t stop to eat so close to the dropship. Especially if you’re thinking of faking out the hunters. Against Jack you don’t want to leave ANY tracks if you’re sneaking. When you went up river, you flew a bit and that can leave a drop on the rock to be picked up by the SS. The route you took is a good one. If you rushed it you could have had an evolve by the time you got to the top, but that’s fine. I wouldn’t play with the map open. You lose a large part of the map, and can’t see elite wildlife icons.
Use snowballs much more often. Keep pressing the R2 button and sending them out.
The S2 build you took is the one used in the old meta. It’s not as good in this one.
S2: 1LS, 1BM, 2VT, 2AS
Hunters were huddled a lot in the second dome, and the medic was very low. You failed to capitalise by using an AS immediately on them. AS, drop down, heavy attack, VT, fly back up, LS at anyone low or incapped medic. Kill the medic and send to dropship, continue on from there. When on the run, keep looking around sniffing to check the hunter’s location.
Third dome you took Sunny down, but failed to finish her off and send to dropship. Big mistake. That gave Val a lot more survivability. If you finished her off the team would crumble fast. Don’t use AS from too far away. When Jack was low you used AS from too far away and dropped down, allowing him to escape the range. When you need to feed, ensure you block LoS from the hunters or they will just stop you eating. That’s a critical mistake you’re making.
I split the information up into key moments.
S1 run and dome
S2 dome and flee
S2 2nd dome
S2 2nd dome flee
Also, what perk did you pick at the start?