Interesting how his personality matches with his special Super Soldier ability. One could think Super Soldier puts him into an adrenaline/rage-fuelled/berserk mode, just what he'd naturally get into if he found out someone died because of Mason Quite clever!
The writing for the first part (pirate space station) was spectacular. I had to read some paragraphs multiple times to actually figure out what was happening, but then I made this incredible movie in my mind of the whole sequence. This would truly make a memorable action sequence in Star Wars or something! Kudos.
Best story so far, even better than Val's.