Evolve "Lay the Ghost to Rest" Trailer [WIP]


#1

Hey guys, I started a fan trailer and thought I’d share it with you guys! I’d like to make it a bit longer, but that’s about what I can get done before I need to hit the hay. I’d love to hear constructive criticism because I’m always looking to improve.

Enjoy nonetheless!

Evolve “Lay the Ghost to Rest” Trailer


#2

if you’re looking for criticism I think you cut to black a little too much. I know it’s to try to sync the scenes with the music to your liking, but it was noticeably bothersome to me. It was a cool trailer other than that. I like trailers that don’t go with the traditional hype train rock music


#3

Gotcha, yeah I was thinking that as it was uploading. I’ll see if I can weave in a few more related clips so that it doesn’t have to cut as much. I’ve only put a couple hours into it so it’s not at all polished yet, but I like to put some stuff up for people to enjoy and avoid the pre-alpha-email drudgery xD


#4

I like it. I think it flows well. Cut to black is honestly not too bad. I would recommend getting rid of some of it, but keeping some of the ones that are well utilized.


#5

That was great! Really like seeing fan-made trailers of games and that was no exception so nice job! I agree with the other two about the “fade to black” thingy but that’s it, really!


#6

I think you definitely used the right combination of clips that suited the music.
I might just go make my own now…